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104: The Beginning

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Starring:

Terra McHale as Sophia Early

Irving as B. Narr

Willow Gravis as Sage Fortune

Corneilus "Neil" McHale as Elijah Yale

Ms. Betty as Paige Alena

Cletus as Rocheny Princien

Busybodies as Tal Minear and Inez Jacobs-Hinton

Director & Sound Designer: Cole Burkhardt

Writer, Creator, & Producer: Jade Madison Scott

Show Art: Julia Patrick

Special Thanks To Jazzy Davis, Tosin Olufolabi, Maya King, Rachel Grossman, Brittany Jones, Robin Harris, Dominique Douglas-Hendricks, Ricky Ramón, and Otis Ramsey-Zoë

Introduction

HOST

WGC Productions presents-

(Retribution Theme; A haunting western tune)

HOST (CONT'D)

Retribution: A Miniseries. You are now listening to episode one. Transcripts for this episode can be found at wgcproductions.com. Enjoy yourself, now. 

EXT. TOWN SQUARE- DAY

The Busybodies, Ms. Betty, and Cleuts are standing in the town square.

BUSYBODIES 

I’m sick of life like this. Sick of strife. Sick of sweat. Sick of cricks in my neck kept down so long under sun’s senseless toil. 

 

CLETUS 

Sick of witches weaving webs ‘round the good folks I love. 

MS. BETTY 

Sick of self. So sick my belly aches. 

CLETUS 

So sick my eyes strain. 

BUSYBODIES 

So sick my back’s broken till it’s bent like the scythe of the reaper sent to haunt me. 

CLETUS 

Is he there in the corner? 

MS. BETTY 

Or there, up above? 

BUSYBODIES 

Death, he lurks like those little dots that float in front of your eyes. 

MS. BETTY 

Appearing outta nowhere. 

 

BUSYBODIES 

Only to disappear, making you question your own good mind. 

CLETUS 

I see him on the faces I love. I see him in myself.

 

BUSYBODIES 

I see him everywhere. 

 

MS. BETTY 

Just everywhere. 

ALL 

He waits for me. 

CLETUS 

God and all the angels, y'all just okay with this? 

MS. BETTY 

What else are we to do? 

BUSYBODIES 

Not enough money to move and even if we did, not enough family to go back to. 

CLETUS 

Not talkin’ bout moving. I’m talking bout are you okay with havin’ those two girls treat us like this. 

MS. BETTY 

Girls? 

CLETUS 

Miserable girls. 

BUSYBODIES 

Terra and Willow? 

CLETUS 

Course, or ain’t you been payin’ attention? You think it’s just coincidence all this started happening when Willow got pregnant? With the rain and all? Terra knew it, that vicious girl, she knew it and she went to talk to Willow. I bet that girl, that little girl, that little, irreverent, ungodly girl wrapped Terra round her finger, that’s the sort of thing that would draw a girl like Terra in, you know? The two of them, that twisted pair, the wind, the rain, the earth laid bare, who else but them has brought death into this, our paradise?

 

BUSYBODIES 

The girls. 

 

CLETUS

Miserable girls. 

 

BUSYBODIES 

Miserable girls. Miserable, wretched, damnable girls. 

CLETUS 

We must right the scales. They’ve unbalanced the order. They’ve gone out of order and now we suffer for their crimes? For their infidelity. Why must we bear their sin? 

BUSYBODIES 

Why must we be punished for their iniquity? Is it always the duty of the righteous to bear the weight of the forsaken? 

 

MS. BETTY 

Wait. 

BUSYBODIES 

What, woman? 

MS. BETTY 

You can’t-

CLETUS 

Can’t what? 

MS. BETTY 

Cletus, you can’t be serious. You have to understand what’s really going on here. Cletus, you have to know what we did. 

 

CLETUS 

We? We did nothing wrong. Did we? 

BUSYBODIES 

No. 

MS. BETTY 

But we-

CLETUS 

But what? Listen, Betty, you’re either for us or against us, and if you’re against us, then you’re with them, and if you’re with them, you better not be.

 

MS. BETTY 

You don’t even have a plan. If they are the cause, and they’re not, but if they were then what’s the plan to fix the scales, as you called it. You’re not God. 

CLETUS 

Of course not, but it wouldn’t be the first time He, in his high holiness, gave his people a certain license against those who despised him. 

BUSYBODIES 

Wouldn’t be the first time at all. 

(Beat) 

MS. BETTY 

You can’t kill them. 

BUSYBODIES 

Sometimes death is justice. 

MS. BETTY 

No. They’re kids. Kids, Cletus. 

CLETUS 

Haven’t been kids in a while, Betty. 

MS. BETTY 

No. 

CLETUS 

I’d rather a hundred of them than any one of us. 

MS. BETTY 

No. 

BUSYBODIES 

Then tell us another way. 

MS. BETTY 

I…..we can wait. 

BUSYBODIES 

Wait? Wait. You think us so foolish as to twiddle our thumbs until they kill us all. Kill our loves. Kill our children.

 

CLETUS 

You of all people should know how that feels. 

BUSYBODIES 

Wait? Wait for what? Wait for Death ‘round the corner to come carry us home? The time of waiting is done, the time of action is here. 

CLETUS 

Go home, Betty. Get some rest. I promise it’ll all be different in the morning. 

MS. BETTY 

I’m too old for this, Cletus. We’re too old for this. 

(Ms. Betty exits.) 

BUSYBODIES 

Wait? Of all the indignities. Nevermind all that, so, tonight, under the cover of darkness we’ll ascend on the house of McHale. 

 

CLETUS 

With gun, rope, and torch. 

BUSYBODIES 

Scorch them from this Earth. Scrub them from our paradise. 

CLETUS 

Justice will be done tonight. 

 

IRVING 

(off-stage) 

Hey, everybody, hey! 

BUSYBODIES 

Irving, our boy. Our gentle sweet boy. 

 

CLETUS 

Speak nothing of this to him. 

 

(IRVING enters) 

IRVING

Hey, Cletus. Ms. Caper. Ms. Donaahue. Everyone. 

 

CLETUS and BUSYBODIES 

Hey, Irving. 

 

IRVING 

Any of y’all know what’s going on with Ms. Betty? Saw her when I was walking over here. She wouldn’t speak to me, which….I mean, I don’t even know why she wouldn’t be speaking, y’all know it’s her favorite hobby. But I think something might be wrong. She was just walkin’ home empty ‘hind the eyes. Any of all y’all know what’s going on? You think I should go and read with her or somethin’? 

 

BUSYBODIES 

Oh, you know how the old woman can be. Flighty. Foolish. Fretful. 

CLETUS 

Don’t waste your time waiting on her. I’m sure you have better things to do, don’t you, Irving? 

IRVING 

Not really….so, what are all y’all whispering about over here? 

CLETUS 

Ain’t whispering ‘bout nothing. 

(Cletus pats Irving on the chest.) 

Just passing time with our neighbors. 

IRVING 

Just passing time? 

BUSYBODIES 

You remember what that’s like, don’t you Irving? You used to pass time too before you forgot us. 

IRVING 

I ain’t forgot you. 

 

CLETUS 

Course not. O’course not. Listen, why don’t you come over round my place tomorrow and we can all sit and talk like we used to? 

 

IRVING 

That sounds mighty nice. 

 

CLETUS

Hear that? Mighty nice. It’s mighty nice. Now come on everyone. Sorry, to leave like this boy, but we all made plans to talk ‘bout the old times. Not something much fun for you I’m afraid. But we can all talk tomorrow, you hear? 

(CLETUS and BUSYBODIES exit.) 

IRVING 

Yeah….tomorrow. 

 

(Transition Music)

EXT. TERRA'S KITCHEN- LATER

Terra is sitting at her kitchen table. She’s writing a letter. The sound of pencil over paper is heard.

TERRA 

-one of the great joys of the territory is the hard work. The dark blueberry skies are made twice as sweet by the labor needed to enjoy them. However, these past months have been...it’s been, difficult. No. Hard. No, it’s been…..it’s been, complicated. Impossible. Devastating. 

(She rips the letter.) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

“Dear Father, I need money. Be generous.” 

(She rips that paper as well) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

“Dearest and Sweetest Father, I hope your pockets are still as deep as the dark, unforgiving, cavern you call a heart, you murderer.” 

 

(A little too provocative. Rip!) 

TERRA (CONT'D) 

“Dear Father, if I said some days I forget to hate you, would you believe me?” 

(She rips the paper with vigor.) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

“Dear Father, if I came home would you even recognize me? Would I recognize you? Would I want to recognize you, or is life better like this? As a living ghost?” 

(She can’t stand to finish this one. She tears it up. She takes a deep breath and starts a new letter) 

 

TERRA (CONT'D)

“Dear Father, I know that somewhere deep inside, you still feel you love me, and maybe you do. I am your daughter after all, and you’re my Father. My Father. The same man who would carefully walk me through the neighborhood after Easter service making sure everyone could see my fine new navy blue dress I was so proud of. The same man that would encourage me to read about all the far off places in Europe and Asia, even though his friends felt it improper. The same man whose shoes I used to wobble on as we haphazardly two-stepped to the exciting crackle of phonographs. The person who loved me. A person I was glad to be loved by. My Father. It is the least you could do to give me enough money to show the bank that I am not a hopeless case. And in case you’ve forgotten, that money is as much my birthright as Neil’s. More even. I’ve earned that money through blood. Both mine and hers. So, is it not right, is it not just that I get to benefit from that which has wounded me and killed her? Isn’t that fair? No. No, it isn’t. To be fair, I’d have to lock you away, make Mother die a slow death, and let her body be defiled by birds and vermin, but I’m being forgiving today, the way she’d want, so money will do. Your daughter, Terra Anne McHale.” 

(She tears it to shreds. There’s a knock at the door.) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

Go away! 

 

WILLOW 

(at the door) 

Terra? 

 

(TERRA goes to open the door. WILLOW enters, disheveled and dirty.) 

TERRA 

Hello. 

WILLOW 

Hi. What’s happening with the all paper? 

TERRA 

I’m not good with words. Why are you here? 

WILLOW 

A pregnant woman shows up at your door and that’s the first thing you ask? 

TERRA 

What else would I ask?

WILLOW 

You could have asked if I was okay. 

 

TERRA 

You look fine. 

WILLOW 

I look like I bathed in dirt and lotioned with mud. 

TERRA 

Why are you here? 

WILLOW 

Where else would I be? 

TERRA 

I don’t know. Where ever you’ve been avoiding me.

 

WILLOW 

I haven’t been avoiding you.

 

TERRA 

Truly? 

(Pause) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

Is it me? Cause I know that you may not have met someone like me before but fleeing typically isn’t the proper response to our vulnerability. It is, in fact, quite hurtful. 

WILLOW 

No, I don’t care. You think I have time to care? No, it’s...I don’t hate you, I suppose. 

 

TERRA 

Thank you? 

WILLOW 

No, that’s not what I mean. 

TERRA 

You do hate me then? 

WILLOW 

I mean, you didn’t know so how….so I don’t hate you. Every day of my life I’ve been surrounded by people who knew what was happening to me, and they mocked me for it. They ignored it, and I don’t think there’s a whole person in this town who I don’t hate. Even Irving with his, well-meaning bullheadedness, but you didn’t know. You never knew. How am I supposed to hate you if you never knew? 

TERRA 

You sound like you’re asking. 

WILLOW 

I think I am. 

TERRA 

I could’ve known. I could’ve asked. 

WILLOW 

I think you already said that that day all way back when. 

 

TERRA 

Feels like forever ago. 

WILLOW 

Might as well be. 

TERRA 

Doesn’t matter though. It’s true. I could’ve paid attention. 

WILLOW 

Yes, I suppose you could’ve. 

(Beat) 

WILLOW  (CONT'D)

I’m sorry I avoided you. I needed time to figure out what not hating a person looked like. What it felt like. 

 

TERRA 

Did you figure it out? 

WILLOW 

It all feels the same. Just awful. 

(Willow sighs) 

WILLOW  (CONT'D)

Just awful. 

 

(Pause) 

TERRA 

I was lyin’ earlier. You look terrible. You okay? Where you been sleeping? 

 

WILLOW 

I’m fine mostly, and out in the ravine. 

TERRA 

The ravine? 

WILLOW 

Wasn’t as bad as you think. Not the most comfortable but I’m here, and food was never too hard to find. A piece of fruit here, a clumsy bird drops a scrap of meat there. Even had water leak out the rock walls. No, wasn’t too bad at all. 

 

TERRA 

There’s water in the ravine? 

WILLOW 

Not a lot, and definitely not enough to collect. Just enough to keep a person alive. No more no less.

 

TERRA 

That’s…..that’s strange, Willow. Mighty strange. 

 

WILLOW 

Maybe so, but normal’s no good most of the time no way. I’m sorry, no I’m not sorry, I mean, I just need to know, are we friends now? 

 

TERRA 

Friends? 

WILLOW 

I’ve never really had one, and since I don’t really hate you, I assumed ...I’d just like to know if I have one now. 

TERRA 

Uh, course? Course we’re friends. 

WILLOW 

Oh, good. I meant it, I did. I’ve never really had one before, well not one I haven’t slept with. And never a girl. I can’t believe it. I’m friends with another girl, one my age even, well, not quite my age, more or less my age. What is it that friends do? Am I to braid your hair? In all the old books I’ve read that’s what friends seem to do all the time, isn’t it? Braiding hair and singing songs and-

 

TERRA 

I-

 

WILLOW 

Or maybe we can just talk or are we to cook food and share recipes? Crochet? 

TERRA  

I don’t crochet. 

WILLOW  

I can teach you. 

TERRA 

Listen, Willow-

WILLOW 

Yes?

 

TERRA 

I think you should- 

(A frantic knocking on the door.)

WILLOW

Were you expectin’ someone? 

TERRA 

No. Probably Irving, but he has a... stay here. 

(Terra exits. She opens the door.) 

IRVING 

(Distant) 

Good, you’re safe. 

 

(Irving and Teraa enter the kitchen) 

TERRA 

Irving, what’s this all about. You lose your...what’da mean “you’re safe?” 

WILLOW

Why are you here? 

IRVING 

Are all your doors locked? 

WILLOW

Why? Were you hoping for a more dramatic entrance? 

IRVING 

Are they? 

TERRA 

Yes. 

IRVING 

Good. 

TERRA 

Did you run here? 

 

WILLOW

Can you stop pacing? You’re making me dizzy. 

TERRA 

Irving, what’s going on? 

IRVING 

Something’s wrong. 

WILLOW

What’d do you….stop pacing. 

 

(Irving stops pacing) 

TERRA 

What’d ya mean something’s wrong? What’s wrong? 

IRVING 

I mean, Cletus and them, I think they’re tryna do something. Like malicious sorts of something. Saw em whispering together. 

 

WILLOW

They always whisperin’. 

IRVING 

Naw, they looked different. 

 

TERRA 

What’cha mean, different? 

IRVING 

Mean different. Can’t describe it. They looked….they looked like somethin’ else. Somethin….something else. I think you two need to go. 

WILLOW

Go? Go where? 

IRVING 

To my house. To Neil’s place. Anywhere other than here. They know Terra’s probably here, and if they know she’s here they’ll be here, and I don’t want any of us to find out what’s gonna happen when they arrive. 

TERRA 

Why would they wanna hurt me? I mean, I know I ain’t made no friends, but I sure didn’t make no enemies.

 

WILLOW

They’re miserable people, Terra. Who knows why they wallow in miserable states? 

 

IRVING 

Alright, we can stand here wax on about human nature and the heart of man, or we can get out this house while we still got all our working bits and pieces.  

 

TERRA 

Fine. We’ll take my truck- 

 

IRVING 

Naw, too noticeable. They’d track us easy. Walking’s best bet. 

 

TERRA 

But she’s pregnant. How we gonna sneak a pregnant woman all the hour-ways back to town on foot? She can hardly walk all that way.  

 

WILLOW

S’true. Only managed to get here cause the ravine’s so close.  

 

IRVING 

Ravine? 

WILLOW

S’where I been hiding.  

 

IRVING 

You’ve been living in a ravine? 

 

TERRA 

Irving.  

 

IRVING 

I know the shed’s not a hotel, but a ravine? 

 

TERRA 

Irving! 

 

IRVING 

What?

 

TERRA 

The ravine’s a good place to hide. 

 

IRVING 

It is a good place to hide.  

 

TERRA 

Willow, you think you can lead us back there in the dark? 

 

WILLOW

Might take a few wrong turns, but I think so.  

 

TERRA 

We can take the back door. We should take food just in- 

 

(Cletus tries to ram down the front door.) 

 

IRVING 

Aww, naw.  

(Terra pulls out her gun.) 

 

WILLOW

You’re gonna shoot ‘em?! 

 

TERRA 

Take the back door. I’ll find you.  

 

WILLOW/IRVING 

Okay. /No way, Jose.  

 

TERRA 

I’m serious, Irving.  I got a gun. I- 

 

IRVING 

No, we’re not leaving.  

 

WILLOW

I need to leave.  

 

IRVING 

Willow- 

 

WILLOW

I got a kid. I got responsibilities.  

 

TERRA 

Can you two get out before they get in? That door ain’t thick. 

 

IRVING 

Y’aint got to be a hero.  

 

TERRA 

Don’t wanna be a hero. But if they don’t know you’re here, you can get far away while me and my widow maker keep ‘em busy.  

 

IRVING 

No. I already left one of you, and I’m not leaving you too. I don’t know what I’d do if you died. 

 

TERRA 

Willow, take him and leave. 

 

WILLOW

Will do. Irving. 

(Cletus busts through the door and enters brandishing a gun of his own.) 

 

CLETUS 

Evening, Ms. McHale. Ms. Willow. Irving. 

 

TERRA 

Cletus, you best get out my house.  

 

CLETUS 

Won’t be doing that. No.  

 

IRVING 

Cletus- 

 

CLETUS 

Don’t move, boy.  

 

IRVING 

Cletus, come on, I know you. You’re no killer, Cletus. Not you.  

 

CLETUS 

It’s a man’s responsibility to defend what he loves. I love this town Irving, and them two girls behind you there are putting it in danger.  I told you we weren’t doing nothing. You should’ve listened.  

 

TERRA 

Put the gun down, Cletus, or I’ll shoot you dead.  

 

CLETUS 

Bet I’ll shoot you first.  

 

TERRA 

Run. 

 

(Willow pulls Irving off through the backdoor.) 

 

TERRA 

Cletus, you even twitch and I’ll shoot you through the heart. 

 

CLETUS 

Big talk. 

 

TERRA 

Look, I’ont know what sort of delusions you got wrapped up in your head, but whatever’s going on up there don’t make it so you gotta kill us.  

 

CLETUS 

You really gonna stand here and tell me that Willow ain’t controlling the weather somehow and you ain’t helping her? 

 

(Terra pauses) 

CLETUS  (CONT'D)

Good, so you understand why I have to do what I have to do.  

 

TERRA 

It’ll make it worse. Killin us’ll make it worse.  

 

CLETUS 

How could it be worse than us. No rain for seven months. Ceaseless wind. Countless woe. Not a wink of sleep for days on end. Madness is our only friend with Death soon to follow? What could be worse than this? 

 

TERRA 

I don’t know. Just know hurtin her’s never made anything better.  

 

CLETUS 

But not doing anything has made things worse. Listen, I’m sorry you went and got yourself wrapped up in this but you made your choice- 

 

TERRA 

I’m not even the one doin it, you know, and the one who is, already gone. You can try to go get her, but I’ll shoot you for you-.  

 

(Cletus laughs) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

What? 

 

CLETUS 

McHale, you think I came alone? Come on in, everybody.

(Busybodies enter with Irving and Willow, trying to break free. Irving has a black eye and he’s bleeding from the head.) 

 

TERRA/IRVING/WILLOW

Irving! You better let him go right now. Look what you did. If he’s not okay, you don’t want to know what I’ll do if he’s not okay./Ms. Donahue, please. Please. Let us go. Please. I just wanna go home, please. Please. Please just let me go home. Just let us go./Let go of me. When I get out, misery unlike anything you’ve ever known will follow. You have not yet begun to know the depths of your consequences.  

 

BUSYBODIES 

Quiet! We’ve gone too long without correcting this indecency. This immoral girl, and you Irving. We were too kind on you. Too forgiving, but tonight you will see what happens to those who mock us, and hopefully you’ll return to us. 

 

WILLOW

Terra, shoot them.  

 

CLETUS 

Bring that other one over here. Tie ‘em to the chairs. We’re gonna make it quick and clean. 

 

IRVING/WILLOW

Terra! 

(Terra shoots the wall.) 

 

TERRA 

Everyone be still. Don’t move a lick. I don’t wanna kill you, Cletus.  

CLETUS 

Too bad.

(IRVING tackles CLETUS from behind.) 

 

IRVING 

You should have stopped, Cletus! 

 

BUSYBODIES 

Get off Irving! Stop it! Stop it you two!

CLETUS 

Get off me boy.  

 

IRVING 

You should have let it go, Cletus. Let dead dogs lie.  

 

TERRA 

Stop. Stop moving the both of you. Irving, get off.  

 

(Cletus fires a shot. Terra screams.) 

 

IRVING 

Terra! 

 

TERRA/CLETUS 

No, I’m fine. I’m-/Wait, I didn’t mean- 

 

IRVING 

Give me the gun.  

 

(Cletus and Irving struggle) 

 

CLETUS 

Get off.  

 

IRVING 

Give me the gun! 

(Cletus shoots Irving)

IRVING (CONT'D)

Ahhhhh! 

TERRA/WILLOW 

Irving! 

 

(Terra and Willow rush to Irving’s side.)  

 

IRVING 

Terra? Terra? 
 

TERRA 

I’m here, Irving. Okay? I’m here. Willow, come on. Push on it. Don’t stop. God there’s so much blood. Come on push harder. Harder.  

 

IRVING 

Ms. Donahue? Ms…...Terra? 

 

CLETUS 

I didn’t mean to….you have to know I didn’t mean to- 

 

TERRA 

Look, just go and get a doctor or something. Get a….Irving, come on, stay awake, alright? You have to stay awake.  

 

IRVING 

I wanna go home. I want my Pop.  

 

TERRA 

Okay, we’ll get you home. You’ll see you Father and….can someone get a doctor, please? 

 

BUSYBODIES 

Town’s an hour away.  

 

TERRA 

Take my truck.  

 

BUSYBODIES 

Don’t know how to drive- 

 

TERRA 

Then run. Run do something. Do...Willow press harder. Press harder, damnit.  

 

IRVING 

Willow? 

 

WILLOW 

Yes, Irving. 

  

IRVING 

Willow, you’re gonna be a good Momma.  

 

WILLOW

Thank you.  

 

IRVING 

Name it after me, okay? Irving’s a good girl name too, you know? 

 

WILLOW

No, it’s not.  

 

IRVING 

No, it’s not.  

 

WILLOW

You….you were better than most, Irving.  

 

IRVING 

I was? 

 

TERRA 

Hey, stop talking like that. You’ll be fine. You’ll be up and walkin’ tomorrow. Look, it’s barely even a scratch. You’re so dramatic. You’ll be fine. Come on, tell him. Tell him. Barely even a….come on, tell him.  

(No one says anything.) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

Forget them. You’ll be fine. You got too much living to do to die. Irving, come on, look, get up. Take you on a walk right now. We’ll show ‘em. Look, we can go outside and see the sky. The stars are so pretty at night and- 

 

IRVING 

Terra, stop.  

 

TERRA 

But you’re...no. 

 

IRVING 

Hey. Hey.  

 

TERRA 

Yes.  

 

IRVING 

(jokingly)  

Think it’ll stain? 

 

(IRVING dies. Much like in life, he was the only one laughing at his joke. Transition Music.)

INT. TERRA'S KITCHEN- NEXT MORNING

Terra is standing in her kitchen as thunder rumbles outside. She takes a deep breath. She takes another deep breath. She slams her fist on the table. She destroys the kitchen. She tears things off walls, and pushes things off table. It should be a rage so intense that it scares the audience, it definitely scares Terra. Once she finishes she can only breathe and see what she’s done. WILLOW enters

WILLOW 

Morning. Your chickens still lay eggs? 

 

TERRA 

You’re hungry? 

 

WILLOW 

Eating for two and all that.  

 

TERRA 

Right. No, they don’t.  

 

WILLOW 

Huh. Got butter? 

 

TERRA 

A little. 

WILLOW 

Then I’ll make us some pancakes.  

 

TERRA 

Ain’t you gonna ask why the kitchen looks like a tornado came through? 

  

WILLOW 

No, I’ve been there before. You like pancakes? 

 

TERRA 

Depends.  

 

WILLOW 

On what? 

 

TERRA 

If they’re good.  

 

WILLOW 

Oh, mine are good. It’s my mother's recipe.  

 

TERRA 

Ain’t got syrup.  

 

WILLOW 

That’s fine. Thank you for letting me stay here tonight.  

 

TERRA 

Where else were you gonna go? JR’s coming by to pick up Irving later.  

 

WILLOW 

Did you clean him up? 

 

TERRA 

Yeah. Changed the clothes too. It did stain.  

 

WILLOW 

You could have asked me to help.  

 

TERRA 

No.  

 

WILLOW 

Did it take long? 

 

TERRA 

No.  

 

WILLOW 

You got chocolate chips? Momma used to put in chocolate chips.  

 

TERRA 

How’d you do it? 

 

WILLOW 

Do what? 

 

TERRA 

The rain? The wind? How’d you do it? 

 

WILLOW 

I didn’t do anything.  

 

TERRA 

I won’t be angry if you tell me, but I mean, if you hadn’t done any of this, I’d still have a farm. I’d still have my friend. 

 

WILLOW 

I didn’t kill Irving.  

 

TERRA 

I know you didn’t directly, but- 

 

WILLOW 

No. No buts. I didn’t. Cletus did.  

 

TERRA 

But it’s all around you- 

 

WILLOW 

I’m just trying to live, I’m not….you’d still have the farm? 

 

TERRA 

I would.  

WILLOW 

Terra, I didn’t know.  

 

TERRA 

That’s fine, I didn’t tell you.  

 

WILLOW 

What are you going to do? 

 

TERRA 

I don’t know.  

 

WILLOW 

Does Neil know? He has money- 

 

TERRA 

I don’t want that money. I can’t take it. 

 

WILLOW 

There’s no shame in getting help if someone’s willing to give it to ya.  

 

TERRA 

No, you don’t understand.  

 

WILLOW 

Yes, I do. You told me.  

 

TERRA 

I….I don’t want to talk about this anymore.  

 

WILLOW 

Ain’t this the sort of thing you talk about with your friend? 

TERRA 

I don’t know.  

 

WILLOW 

Well, it just seemed like if you have someone to talk to it makes no sense why you oughtn't not talk to ‘em….McHale? 

 

TERRA 

But how’d you do it? 

 

WILLOW 

I really didn’t do anything. 

 

(Beat) 

 

TERRA 

I don’t want pancakes. I’m not hungry. 

  

(The front door swings open.) 

 

NEIL 

(distant) 

Terra? Terra! 

 

TERRA 

Here. We’re in here. 

 

(NEIL enters) 

 

NEIL 

Terra, I heard what happened. Is it true? 

 

WILLOW 

It’s true.  

 

NEIL 

Oh.  

 

TERRA 

It’s true.  

 

NEIL 

They did all this to the kitchen too? Were they trying to bring the place down- 

 

TERRA 

No. That was….no. 

 

NEIL 

Are you….are you both well? 

 

TERRA 

No.  

 

WILLOW 

Physically, yes. 

 

TERRA 

He died in my arms, Neil. 

 

NEIL 

Willow, could you please give us- 

 

WILLOW 

I’ll be in the parlor. 

 

(Willow exits.) 

 

NEIL 

Terra Anne- 

 

TERRA

Why does this keep happening, Neil? Why do I know so many dead people? 

 

NEIL 

Perhaps you should sit. 

 

TERRA 

Did I do something?  

 

NEIL 

Really, you should sit- 

 

TERRA 

Cause if I did something I’m sorry. You hear, me? I’m sorry. I couldn’t be more sorry. I can’t be more- 

 

NEIL 

Terra. Please just...I did something that concerns you and I feel you should sit before you- 

 

TERRA 

Jesus, just say it. I can take it. I always take it.  

 

NEIL 

I telegraphed Father. 

 

TERRA 

Why would you- 

 

NEIL 

A rather expensive one at that. I told him everything.  

 

TERRA 

Everything? 

 

NEIL  

Everything. It’s time you go home, Terra.  

 

TERRA 

I am home.  

 

NEIL 

It’s time you really go home.  

 

TERRA 

You….you can’t do that.  

NEIL 

But I did.  

 

TERRA 

No, Neil, you can’t. I’m supposed to stay here. 

 

NEIL 

Stay here? Here? A place where the closet doctor is an hour away. A place where everyone smiles in your face and talks behind your back. A place where nothing grows. A place where you only have one friend and now you don't even have that- 

 

TERRA 

It’s my gift, Neil.  

 

NEIL 

You keep saying that, but I don’t know what that means. All I know is that this place, this place is going to kill you, and I refuse to be the brother of a dead sister.  

 

TERRA 

I hate you.  

 

NEIL 

That’s okay, as long as you get help- 

 

TERRA 

I don’t need your help.  

 

NEIL 

Yes, you do.  

 

TERRA 

I don’t want your help.  

  

NEIL 

This isn’t about what either of us wants.  

 

TERRA 

You can't do this.  

 

NEIL 

You need more than I can give. More than this place can give. 

 

TERRA 

I hate you.  

 

NEIL 

One day you won’t. 

 

TERRA 

You sound just like him. 

(Pause) 

TERRA (CONT'D)

I thought you loved me.  

(Beat) 

 

NEIL 

I….this….fantasies aren’t forever, Terra.  

 

TERRA 

Where are you going? 

 

NEIL 

To help you pack.

 

(As Neil Exits

You can go in now, Willow.  

 

(Willow enters.) 

 

WILLOW 

Cornelius has the strangest look in his eyes. Something close to heartbreak. Is everything okay? Terra? 

 

(Terra loses the accent)  

 

TERRA 

I'm a bad farmer. 

 

WILLOW 

O….kay.  

 

TERRA 

Even before the drought. Neil’s been lying to our parents since I got here. Lying saying I was good, I’m not good.  

 

WILLOW  

Farming’s not easy. 

 

(Beat) 

 

TERRA 

How did you survive in this Godforsaken town? 

 

(Willow really thinks about it.) 

 

WILLOW 

I don’t know, but I did.  

 

TERRA 

You know, in Boston, when things felt a little too oppressive, I used to pretend that I was someone else. That I was some grand adventurer trapezing around Europe and the thick jungles of the Amazon. You know, like some sort of Charles Marlow. 

 

WILLOW  

Really? 

 

TERRA 

Really. Sometimes, all I ever wanted to be away from there.  

 

WILLOW 

But don’t you miss it? 

 

TERRA 

All the time. How ‘bout you? 

 

WILLOW 

How ‘bout I what? 

 

TERRA 

What did you use to imagine you’d do? What was your big fantasy?

WILLOW 

Promise you won’t laugh?  

 

TERRA 

I’ll try my best.  

 

WILLOW  

I used to imagine that I was a princess.  

 

TERRA 

A princess.  

 

WILLOW 

You said you wouldn’t laugh.  

 

TERRA 

I said I’d try my best, and I am. I am trying my best.  

 

WILLOW 

I suppose it is kinda silly.  

 

TERRA 

No, it’s nice. A princess.  

 

WILLOW 

A princess, and ‘course, I had my own little castle on the top of the tallest hill in the kingdom. And a prince- 

 

TERRA 

A prince? 

 

WILLOW 

The kindest prince, who would always be there to play and do all the things that princes and princesses do.  

 

TERRA 

And servants? 

 

WILLOW 

Oh, we didn’t have servants, Food would appear. Magic of course was a staple.  

 

TERRA 

That sounds nice.   

 

WILLOW 

It was. It really was.  

 

TERRA 

How about now? 

 

WILLOW 

Huh? 

 

TERRA 

What do you want now? 

 

(A gentle roll of thunder.) 

 

WILLOW 

What do I want? What I want….I think I…I just want to be a girl. I just want the things girls want. I just want to be loved and to love and be needed. Not the way that people need entertainment, or distraction, not the way gossips need a target, but the way people need people. I don’t think that’s a lot to ask do you? 

 

TERRA 

I don’t think that’s a lot at all.  

 

WILLOW 

See, that’s what I think.  

 

TERRA 

Willow, if you could go anywhere in the whole world, where would it be? 

 

WILLOW 

Anywhere? 

 

TERRA 

Anywhere. 

 

WILLOW 

Mmmmmm….anywhere in the….I’d like to see the sea. I always read in my books that it was….I don’t know, it just sounded like it would be so….so different than here. I just want to go meet it where it stands.  

 

TERRA 

My family used to go to the coast in the summers. 

  

WILLOW 

Is it wonderful? 

 

TERRA 

It’s…..you should come and see.  

WILLOW 

Whada’ mean? 

 

TERRA 

Today I decided I’m gonna run away again, and you're right the sea’s a good place to go.  

 

WILLOW 

Run away? 

 

TERRA 

It’s the only thing I’ve ever been good at.  

 

WILLOW 

But- 

 

TERRA 

No buts. I lost the farm. I lost my friend, but my freedom’s still here, and yours is too, so if you want to use it- 

 

WILLOW 

You want me to go with you? 

 

TERRA 

It’s no fun being alone.   

 

WILLOW 

You want me to go with you.  

 

TERRA 

But only if you want to. So what do you say? Willow, are you coming or what? 

 

WILLOW 

I….I’d love to.

 

(Willow laughs and Terra laughs too, then, for the first time in seven months, they can hear it. The gentle patter of rain. The curse is broken,  retribution has been had, and those who have been denied their voice the longest have finally been recentered in the narrative.)

CLOSING

Thank you for listening to the second episode of Retribution: A Miniseries. Retribution was written and composed by Jade Madison Scott. Edited and directed by Cole Burkhardt. Terra McHale was played by Sophia Early. Willow Gravis was played by Sage Fortune. Irving was played by B. Narr. Cornelius McHale was played by Elijah Yale. Ms. Betty was played by Paige Alena. Cletus was played by Rocheny Princien. And the Busybodies were played by Tal Minear and Inez Jacobs-Hinton. The Retribution logo was designed by Julia Partick. If you wish to support the show and have access to behind the scenes exclusive subscribe to the WGC Productions Patreon which can be accessed through the website. 

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